Changing Elements 12 Angry Men

As I was reading "12 Angry Men", I was thinking about how the story would change if various elements were different. The first obvious element would be having women instead of men. I think the women would add more drama to the case. If there were no stage directions, I think it would be better. To me stage directions are pointless. I'd rather vision what I think would happen. I like to create my own mental picture for myself. It helps give reading and me an imagination. If this story took place in a more modern time period, it would definitely be all over the news and the evidence would be proven more clearly due to the new technology we have today.  Another element that could have changed the whole story is Juror number 8. If juror number 8 wasn't so insisting that the boy was not guilty the boy would not have walked away free in the end. Juror 8 also caused disagreements which made juror 3 and some others mad so that made the story more interesting. If juror 8 voted yes he is guilty then it would have made the story very bland because every juror voted guilty. With all these changes I have listed and said, I think this would impact the play a lot because every little part is crucial to what makes this play so famous. To me I believe the play is best left untouched. It is fine the way it is. It was a pleasure to read. Would you change anything to this play? How do you think the play would have ended if juror number 8 voted guilty in the beginning...would the boy walk away free? 

The Theme for 12 Angry Men

There are many themes in the play "12 Angry Men". The main theme I am going to focus on is the theme of Justice. Justice throughout this story remains unclear. Is the boy guilty? Not Guilty? The jurors who are on trial are myopic. They are single minded. They automatically see the son as the murderer of this crime scene. Each juror out of the twelve have different influences and conceptions on how to handle this court case. Some are being irrational and then others are not. All twelve jurors are bias in some way. Some jurors take it seriously as if it were the real American system but others feel more personal about it because some jurors have experienced many injustices of their own in their past, so they know how the son feels being pestered with questions and judged guilty automatically. Juror eight insists the whole jury looks deeper into the evidence, while Juror three thinks he is guilty. Most jurors don't even want to be there and they don't really care about the whole situation. One juror even says "Who knows, maybe we can all go home." To enforce the theme of justice, this play shows values, ideas and prejudice towards each other but mainly to the son who killed his father. 

12 Angry Men Untold Story

I decided to read a famous play called "12 Angry Men". To me in this play there is an untold story. Sadly, in this play the twelve men do not have names they go by numbers. These men are jurors for a murder trial. In this trial a nineteen year old boy supposedly killed his father in their apartment building by stabbing him with a switch knife. Eleven out of the twelve men believe the boy is very much guilty. However, juror number eight believes otherwise. On page 18 juror eight says "Nobody has to prove otherwise; innocent until proven guilty". Juror number eight wants justice to be done and always seeks the truth. He has a peculiar thought and belief that the adolescent boy did not kill his father but there is a chance he very well did. The untold story in this play deals with the boy who is held in trial. His story is being told by a bunch of men sitting around a table in a jury room. Yet the boy himself isn't apart of it. It is still his story because that's all the jurors talk about and discuss. To be honest this play always leaves me on edge thinking. The jurors believe he is guilty because he had a bad past, his mother dying, not doing well in school, abuse from father, and other stabbing incidents. Because of his past these men are assuming and judging that he automatically killed his father. Of course we don't know for sure if he did it or not, but to me I don't think the boy had a chance to even speak his side of the story, or when he did it just went in one ear and out the other for the jurors. In the story that was told to the jurors, apparently the boy and his father got into an argument and the boy said "I'm going to kill you" and soon after the father struck his son, the son stabbed his father right in the chest with a switch knife. This is the only story they heard and since it was the first and only thing they heard it's what they believe. Juror eight believes otherwise. He believes that there is another story to be told. He believes it could have gone a different way and no one can see it. He is trying to give the boy a chance but the evidence of everything is pointing to the son that he is guilty. Otherwise if it would not have been told, all the jurors wouldn't have come to the conclusion that he is guilty and they all wouldn't be so narrow-minded. They would actually have a calm, gentlemen like talk instead of having a short tempered angry conversation. They would see the whole picture instead. For those who read this play would you agree that the boy held in trial has an untold story? Also, do you think the boy is downright guilty of this crime or are you more like juror number eight...would you think deeper into the situation and give the boy a chance? For me I believe the boy is guilty, but again he should be heard. 

Kaffir Boy

The story "Kaffir Boy" is written by Mark Mathabane. In this story you can already tell it is about race. The story was taken place in South Africa, during a dark time called The Apartheid. For some insight this Apartheid was a policy/system of segregation or discrimination on grounds of race. This took place in the years 1948 to 1994. That is a very long time where white's had the privilege to do just about anything and the black's were slaves in their own country. The voice of this story is from a young boy. In this story they never say his name, that is why it is called "Kaffir Boy". The word kaffir is used in South Africa to refer to a black person. It is now widely considered an offensive ethnic slur. The text is written in first person. The voice of this text is the author from when he was very young. The kaffir boy is usually with his Granny. He helps her work in the garden for their white madam Ellen. This text is addressed to all of the black and white society. It is addressed to children so it can have the children change history and make things better. It is addressed because we don't want to repeat history and also we want to know the truth about segregation back then and how it affects us now as a world. This connects to "Girl" and "Danger of a Single Story" because they all talk about human rights. The single story (stereotype) of this text is that Blacks are inferior to whites. They aren't good enough and they aren't equal. The setting of this story is taken place in school area then leads to Ellen's house. Ellen is an old white female who hired the kaffir boy's Granny to work in her garden. It's the first time the kaffir boy sees white schoolchildren. He see's a traffic sign that says "Children Crossing, Stop. Kinders Stap Oor". This sign is a key part of symbolism. The author put this in his passage to get the overall meaning out. The meaning of this sign and passage is that the white society wanted to keep it segregated. If blacks and whites were friends they would affect the power structure of white people being on top. The power structure would fall and white people did not want that. The word "stop" in the sign represents the racial line. No blacks were allowed to cross because no one wanted to mix. How would you feel as a person if you weren't allowed to go to school with other kids? How would you feel to be a slave in your country? 

Girl

In this short story called Girl written by Jamaica Kincaid, the tone of the story seems to be very harsh. In Girl , it sounds as if the speaker is a Mother talking to her daughter. The way the author wrote this is by using run on sentences. These run on sentences sound like commands on how a girl should behave and act in public and most of all how to act around men. The story goes in chronological order by the Mother talking to her daughter as a child for example the author says  in line 10 "...like the slut you are so bent on becoming". Then through the middle of the story she seems to be talking as if the child is now a teenager for example in lines 31-32 "...this way they won't recognize immediately the slut i have warned you against becoming".  At the end, the author says in lines 47-48 "...after all you are really going to be the kind of woman who the baker won't let near the bread?". This story is very similar to Danger of a Single Story because they both indicate various gender roles, such as women should learn how to clean and cook. Women should not play in the dirt yet boys can. Women should work in the house while the men make money for the family. Some people say the tone of this story can either be harsh or caring. In my eyes I believe that the tone of this story is harsh only because of the various slut remarks, and all the mother says are commands on how to be a low-key slut. At first I thought it could be both harsh and caring because the Mother is giving advice to her daughter. She is looking out for her but then again it is very harsh because she keeps calling her a slut in lines 10 and 16. Another tone of this story is very sexual. For me it took me a while to understand all the little dirty metaphors and jokes. It's sexual because the mother is actually giving her advice on how to be a slut without anyone knowing right away. She tells her in lines 45-46 "always squeeze the bread to make sure it's fresh". She's not really talking about bread in that sentence. If you re-read that line, you will finally understand it. Clever isn't it? Talking in metaphors also leads into a gender role because it's ideal for women to talk in metaphors. That is ideal in other countries. From what I said would you agree with me that this short story is harsh? If you were a mother would you be harsh or caring in giving your daughter advice about being a slut? 

Danger of a Single Story

A novelist named Chimamanda Adichie wrote a short story called Danger of a Single Story. Adichie wrote this story in 2009. The point of the text is that one person can cause a stereotype which affects the people who hear this stereotype and believe it. Stereotypes take away humanity.  One theme from this story is power. Power is represented in a negative way. An example of this is when Adichie visited Fide's village (Fide is her house boy). Adichie's mother always told her that Fide's family has nothing, they are poor and can't do anything. To Adichie's surprise, she saw a "beautifully patterned basket of dyed raffia" that Fide's brother made. She only knew them as poor, she didn't know they could really do anything. A single story is a stereotype, a point of view. She believed it because her mother was the one that told her this single story. Usually as a kid you believe anything you hear. Generally you believe what your parents tell you because they are your role models. To me, this story reminds me of that saying "Don't judge a book by it's cover", because people just assume the worst. People assume things about a person when they haven't even spoken a word to them. It's a negative aspect because it makes people very narrow-minded. Kids hear a number of opinions being thrown around by their parents but they cant make up their opinion on how they feel about something because they automatically believe their parents. These stereotypes, opinions and single stories affect the theme humanity. Adichie mentions the word "dispossess" which basically means "take away humanity" because you tell their story. Someone with power is easily manipulative. Every person is worthy of honor or respect. These stories can break the dignity of the people which also means it can break the respect of people. Since single stories are so powerful why can't we use these single stories to make this a better place? Why don't people spread positive single stories? We have to remember it's the person's story not the messenger's. People tell negative stories about an individual sometimes to make themselves feel better, or to make them feel like they are the best. They want to be the greatest so they label people to be below them so they have all the power. People immediately believe what they hear because it's the first thing they hear and they never experienced it first hand for themselves. People are surprised when their story doesn't match the reality. Single stories are false advertisements. Have you ever heard a single story and believed it? How can we as a country change the negative stories to make them positive? 

The Kite Runner (End)

After Baba's passing, Rahim Khan (Baba's friend) convinces Amir to come back to Pakistan so he can talk to him. Rahim is very ill and old so he wanted to tell Amir something very important that his father Baba has never told. Plot twist Hassan is Baba's child, that is why Baba and Hassan were so close. After Baba and Amir fled Afghanistan, Hassan stayed at his their house to basically protect it and always thought they would come back. During this time Hassan got married and had a kid named Sohrab. The Taliban (Afghan terrorist group) invaded Hassan's home and him and his wife dead but took the son. Ironically, Assef the boy who raped Hassan earlier in the book is the leader of the Taliban and uses Sohrab the son as a sex slave. Rahim tells Amir he has to save and find Sohrab who is his nephew. Amir tells Assef that he wants to fight for the little boy and Assef mocks Amir and says "Are you gonna run away again" referring to the time Amir ran away when he saw Hassan being raped. Amir explains that he won't run away for Hassan's sake. Amir wants his nephew and wants to take him home back to the States. He ran away once he is not going to do it again. As they were fighting, Sohrab got a slingshot with a gold ball and shot it at Assef's eye to make him blind. Amir and Sohrab escaped and got away, and stayed at a hospital. This time period is around 2001 when 9/11 happened so Amir didn't think it was possible to bring Sohrab back to America. After the many doubts and concerns they finally get Sohrab back to California so he can become a legal citizen. Sohrab was very quiet and shy around Amir and his wife but then one day he finally spoke to Amir and told him that Hassan his father always talked about Amir and how he was a great friend. Amir starts to feel guilty so then later confesses to his wife Hassan's rape and how he watched but didn't say anything. Amir now feels that he is free. Amir and the boy fly kites the same way Amir and Hassan did during the tournaments.

If you were Amir would you be angry that your father kept this huge secret from you?

The Kite Runner (Middle)

As time passes, Amir is still acting strange towards Hassan. Amir to me seems to be trying to get rid of his friendship with Hassan, but he is also trying to get rid of Hassan and his father all together. Hassan and his father are servants for Amir and his father Baba. Amir wants Hassan and his father desperately gone and out of his house so Amir puts all of his birthday money and the watch Baba gave him and put it under Hassan's mattress to frame him. Amir did this to show that Hassan is a thief and to convince his dad that they should kick him out because Amir's dad said theft is the worst possible thing you can do. Baba (Amir's father) ironically forgives Hassan so they stay and remain servants for Amir. Hassan's father find out the truth behind this setup and decides for himself and for Hassan that they will leave. He was very angry. Rahim (Baba's close friend) convinces Amir to move to Pakistan because he said "There is a way to be good again." After, Baba and Amir move to Kabul, Pakistan, Pakistan is invaded by the Russians and it became a dangerous war zone. Baba and Amir fled to the United states and started a new life in California. Tragedy hit, Baba has lung cancer. He refuses to do chemotherapy because he doesn't want to seem weak. Amir now attends college and learning English, he meets this girl named Soraya at a flea market they fall in love and later become married. If you were Baba and you knew you were gonna die of cancer would you do chemo to maybe save your life or would you not do it because you don't want to seem weak?

The Kite Runner (Beginning)

The novel The Kite Runner, written by Khaled Hosseini has several different themes. One of the themes in this book that stood out to me the most is friendship. Amir and Hassan seem to be great friends who face life together as it is. Amir is very wealthy while Hassan is apart of the lower class. Amir always challenges Hassan's loyalty and trust to see if he is a good friend. One example of the tests is that Amir told Hassan to slingshot a rock at a dog and Hassan didn't want to but said he'd do it for Amir. Amir tests his trust because Baba which is Amir's father always compares the two kids. Baba is constantly telling Amir that he should be more like Hassan who is loyal and not self centered. To me this friendship is very questionable because on page 75 Hassan was being harassed and ended up being raped by several random boys on the streets. Another theme that is presented here is betrayal. To me this is considered betrayal because Hassan think he's great friends with Amir, but Amir doesn't show his true loyalty when he is a key witness to Hassan's rape. Amir shows his true colors of who he is. Amir was off in the distance and could see what was happening but did not stand up for his friend at all and ran away. Did Amir not help Hassan because he is embarrassed that Hassan is considered to be dirty and is apart of the lower class?  Hassan didn't know Amir was there at all. Amir becomes distant to Hassan and Hassan doesn't know why. I believe that he is distant because he is ashamed that his friend Hassan was raped and he was a bystander to the situation. To me, Amir is a coward. Does Amir really care for Hassan as much as Hassan cares for Amir? For a deeper meaning I think Amir is facing a conflict with himself. If you were Amir in this situation and your friend was being raped would you help save him or would you run away? 

Paper Towns The Ending

It's the night of graduation. Quentin grabs his friends and a couple of girls to go with him to this journey to New York. It is a long intense journey. Quinten is trying to get there as quickly as possible so they can catch Margo before she leaves Agloe forever. 21 hours pass by and the reach New York finally. They come across this old abandoned barn. At first Quinten and his friends doubted checking the barn to see if she was really there. But something made Quentin believe she was actually there. Bam! There Margo is sitting in this old barn writing. After, Quinten confronts her, they start to argue. Quinten's friends get mad and upset so they leave. They end up taking his car to drive back to Orlando so they wouldn't miss the school dance. Quinten didn't even care that they left , he had more important things on his mind. He wants/needs to get Margo back into his life. Margo realizes she loves him too but convinces him that they aren't meant for each other. Margo confesses that she left because she needed everyone to forget her false personality back in Orlando. I think Margo just couldn't be herself around her classmates. She needed to get away to find herself. Quinten refuses to believe her, he doesn't want to give up on her just yet. Yes they love each other but they both agree that they will both have different futures. Margo stays in New York while Quinten takes the next bus back to Orlando. Quinten joins his friends at graduation and the school dance. Quinten is now finally free to move on from his love for Margo Roth Spiegleman. Margo remains the "paper girl" and Quinten remains the "paper boy". The end.

Paper Towns The Middle

Margo has left a series of clues to Quinten and his friends. Quinten and his friends piece together the clues she left and found out where she is hiding. Quinten is facing many conflicts throughout this story. One of the conflicts he is facing is his against his friends. His friends don't really want to look for Margo, but change their mind because they want to help their friend. But later in the middle of the book school is coming to an end. Graduation and their important high school dance is coming up. Quinten's friend Radar has a girlfriend who he brings onto the trip to find Margo. This trip is a 21 hour trip from Orlando, Florida to Agloe, New York. His friends give Quinten trouble by saying that they want to be home in time for the school dance but Quinten thinks they aren't being good friends because they aren't sticking around with him. All of his friends lost hope in the search for Margo. Another conflict Quinten faces is him against himself. Throughout the journey he doubts himself constantly. Asking questions such as; Does she really love me? Is she really in New York? He realizes he follows a string of false leads, which makes him think he loves someone who doesn't exist. Quinten tries to understand Margo's personality and who she is so he bribes her little sister and hangs out in her room so he can get a feel for who she really is. Will Quinten continue his search for Margo? Will Quinten make it back home in time for graduation and the high school dance? My opinion has changed from my first blog post, I think that Quinten will find her, because he has the desire for her, and I think she will come home with him so they can both go to the dance together.

Paper Towns The Beginning

The theme of this book is that friends will stick by your side no matter what. My book belongs in the mystery genre because in this book Margo runs away but leaves clues so her fellow classmates can find her. Some other books that may be in the same genre are The woman in white, and One for the money.  Quinten is your typical high school student who believes him and his friends Radar, and Ben don't belong with the popular crowd. If Quinten was an animal he would be a raccoon. He is always neglected by others. Quinten was madly in love with his neighbor and fellow classmate Margo Roth Spiegelman. Quinten and Margo were close friends before high school but grew apart when Margo started dating a popular jock. Margo plans revenge on her ex-boyfriend after she finds out that he was cheating on her with a so called "friend". Margo asks Quinten for help, and without hesitation he agreed. He thought in his head maybe by helping her she would fall in love with him. They both do a series of pranks and Quinten's love for Margo rises throughout the night. A mystery occurs the next morning, when Quinten finds out Margo went missing. Margo leaves Quinten clues such as riddles, and puzzles leading him a little bit closer to where she is hiding. Quinten drags his nerdy friends along with him for help and start piecing together each clue. Before she went missing she always told Quinten about paper towns. A paper town is a fake town cartographers use to detect copycats. In all the clues that Quinten has found he realized that they all lead to a paper town. When days turned into weeks, Quinten found out where Margo went. Margo went to a Paper town called Algoe, New York. How will Quinten get there? Will Quinten ever find her? In my opinion I think Quinten will never find her. He is going to get close to finding her but then give up and find another girl he can obsess over.